My goal for writing

Story 1 :

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It was freezing cold in Alaska. Reed the strong one, Jaedyn the bag carrer, and Wairangi the fearless one were hiking the rocky, teitei maunga. Until it started to hail Reed, Jaedyn, and Wairangi Climbed up high until they came to a gigantic, dark, spooky, cave.They all decided to camp there the night Reed spectated around to see if there was anything dangerous. Reed saw the shiny, flashing light around the corner and the flashing light was crystals, rubies, and diamonds. Reed hurdled to Jaedyn, and Wairangi to tell them that Reed discovered crystals,rubys rubis  rubies and diamonds. They all went around to search it and Jaedyn, and Wairangi said, “woah this is awesome we can be rich grabbing this.” But Jaedyn went to go sit on this bunch of snow to see if the crystal was real but Jaedyn was sitting on a huge, white, hairy yeti. The yeti woke up and chased Reed, Jaedyn, and Wairangi to there boat and sailed away very, very, very fast.  They were lucky they made it out with crystals, rubies, and diamonds.

Story 2 :

As the strong tāne was lying on his back underwater in the huge aquarium, the mangō taniwha was heading towards him. The tāne kept very, very, very still so that he didn’t get eataen eaten. The tāne grabbed the shark some food for the mangō taniwha. So the tāne feed him but something else was wrong. One of the bones got stuck in his throat so the enormous shark couldn’t breathe. The strong tāne didn’t know what to do so the tāne grab him squeeze the shark in the stomach. Then this bone came out of his mouth and it had blood on it. The tāne saw the blood spread so he jumped out of the tank then refilled it. He was lucky he didn’t get the germs.

Story 3 :

My favourite part of me is my feet because they help me run very fast. They help me walk when I was a baby. They also help me stomp around when I’m mad. When I get older they will be big and strong. Also they help me hari to music. That's why my legs are the best part of me

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My goal for writing:

Aspect 2 : Is to use language features like metaphors and similes